I could have waited till morning … but then I’d have to rewrite a future scene right now. Not feeling it yet, not enough coffee. -_-; So instead: A03, Asstr, or on this blog thingie.
As a quick aside, the end half might be … weird. Not entirely happy with it myself, but that’s the fun of writing. You get the play with people situations unfamiliar or flat out foreign to you. So to those that find the whole argument weird, I can only say I’ll try to better next time.
Dark Alley Ramblings 